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五绝.早春二月

2014-03-01 11:28:16| 分类：五绝 | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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窈窕一村姑，青枝二月初。

休言花未艳，春色满茅庐。

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何处访新梅，无花对旧醅。

东君应不远，只待一声雷。

叠趣庐主雅和

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敲门唤小姑，踏雪赏梅初。
昨夜春私访，遗香叠趣庐。

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寒风孕早梅，小火暖新醅。
有脚春先到，依稀听响雷。

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五绝《早春二月》两首，其一用孤雁入群格，两首诗格律严谨，写意深刻，尤其第一首诗将村姑的美用二月初的青枝比喻，诗人倍感亲切。若将“未”字改为“失”，全诗意境秒不可言。第二首诗全诗一气呵成，语言精练，意境高深，值得赞扬。

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